English Essay

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Every rhetorical event has a unique situation. Fundamentally, a rhetorical situation is the perspective within which a speaker or writer develops writing or speech as a way of the engaging the audience in a problem-solving session. Each rhetorical case has three fundamental parts that are the context, purpose, and audience. Individual writers and speakers use elements of a rhetorical situation differently in that they are some who make good use of the parts while other lightly apply them in their work.
In the above excerpt from my previous work, I have noted some gross mistakes that I frequently do. One is tautology or repetition of words such as rhetorical in the same statement. The other is the use of the wrong words such as “employ” instead of “use” when the former does not even fit in the context well. Also, I do mistake the plural and singular forms as seen in the original version where I wrote that “Each rhetorical case has three fundamental part that is the context, purpose, and audience.” Finally, I usually fail to use connecting words and phrases between sentences to induce coherence. The following is the original version of my essay.
Every rhetorical event has a unique rhetorical situation. Fundamentally, a rhetorical situation is the perspective within which a speaker or writer develops their rhetorical discourse. Each rhetorical case has three fundamental part that is the context, purpose, and audience. Individual writers and speakers employ elements of a rhetorical situation differently in that they are some who make good use of the parts while other lightly apply them in their work.

When it comes to writing, punctuation, articles, and vagueness are some of the things I do worst. Sometimes I have to pause and look up in the dictionary for the right way to put words and phrases so that I can achieve understandable and straightforward sentence. It costs me time and energy, especially, when I have to consult my teacher of friends for help. I, however, understand the need for simplicity in a sentence, and it is what I do best. Simplicity involves the use of the most common and easy words, phrases, and short sentences that are well connected (Zinsser 2). Interestingly, simplicity reduces the risk of vagueness and run on sentences among other mistakes a writer can do in writing.
Work Cited
Zinsser, W. Simplicity. Retrieved from http://www.geo.umass.edu/faculty/wclement/Writing/zinsser.html