personal statement revised

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School psychologist is necessary for developing future professional career to help children and youths succeed academically, socially, and behaviorally. For a long time, children and families from diverse background have had challenges with their health and mental status. The government has gone a milestone to set up facilities that will ensure that the lifestyles of the families are improved. They have ended up building excellent medical facilities and health care centers to cover on these children and families. After a long time of experience with these families, I felt the urge to pursue a program that will enhance my skills to understand and give directive measures to improve the well-being of children.
I believe in pursuing an interest in a field that will expound my knowledge on understanding the needs of the children and families. I want to have an encounter in life with building the community by advocating for their challenges. The degree program in the university has provided some understanding of the human challenges and joining the master program will be an opportunity to broaden my knowledge.
I am interested in distinctively taking care of the particular needs of the families and children. In professional path have done several volunteer works where I have successfully worked with an advanced city agency in New York that cares for the children and families with special needs. In the agency, I managed to assist several families by administering the right therapy on handling their problems.

Families and children need treatment to propagate into a prosperous future since research has found that psychological problems are a primary cause for poor performance and ultimately low achievement.
I have successfully undergone through the graduate and undergraduate program and now believe that when you grant me a chance for the master degree, then I will further broaden my knowledge and diligently find solutions to the challenges these families and children encounter by providing them the right medical therapy. I want to make a difference in the lives of children and the families they come from so that they can have a peaceful environment that will enhance their lifetime achievements. Due to the concern in understanding the behavioral characteristic and finding solutions to the problems affecting these groups, I have decided to apply for the master degree program at your university.
I believe I have all the pertinent requirements to pursue the master program in your university successfully. Therefore I would like to request for a chance within the master program so that I can successfully pursue a future career and ultimately, be in a position to efficiently apply the knowledge to a better living of the families and children.